Your Love

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My love is like a sky,

it has no limit or it is endless

My love is like a dove,

with a message that god above had blessed.

 

My love is like a ballpen,

it won't work without an ink

My love is like my eyes,

because of you it will blink.

 

My love is like a moon,

it will lightens up your night

My love is like a star,

with you, it will shine so very bright.

 

My love is like a song,

it will make your feelings good

My love is like a sunny morning,

it will better up your mood.

 

My love is like the flow of water on a river,

You and I know that it'll last forever

YOUR LOVE is like a police

and to you I will surrender. 

 

 

(Hope You Like This ! ) 

 

Friderick !

Hello ! Im Friderick Salvacion. Im just a 14 yr. old boy who loves writing and reading poems !


magsinoalvin's picture

i like it! especially "My

i like it!

especially

"My love is like a ballpen,

it won't work without an ink"

 

robleza's picture

________________________ maga

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maganda ung last part boss! ung surrender heheh! i love it! i love its simplicity... you are great! :)) I feels like I wanna put you poem in an expensive flower base engrave on it! :)) keep it up yow!  

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magsinoalvin's picture

nawala ka ahh... :) kung

nawala ka ahh... :)

kung naalala mo pa ako..

Friderick's picture

Salamat !

 Salamat po sa inilaan ninyong oras sa pagbabasa !

 My classmates told the same comment with yours !

 

sige po, pag-bubutihin ko pa po ang pagsulat ng mga tula ...

Muli, maraming salamat ! 

 

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Ako ang Batang manunulat,

naglalayong  mapalawak ang kaalaman sa pagsulat !

nice

nice

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