Rx for avoiding tedium in writing: the reference word strategy

by JoeCarillo ( | | | | )
July 13, 2012
Dear Fellow Communicator,
As the second in a series of pointers for crafting more readable and compelling compositions, I am posting in this week’s edition of Jose Carillo’s English Forum an essay on a basic writing technique that I wrote for my English-usage column in The Manila Times in early 2004. The essay, “Using noun omission to avoid repetition,” takes up the so-called reference word strategy, which is a conscious effort on the part of the writer to avoid the excessive repetition of certain key words or phrases in a composition so as not to bore the reader. Instead, the writer methodically replaces them with more concise words or phrases that the reader can easily figure out from the relationships of the phrases in the sentence or from the context of the composition itself. I’m sure that many of us already use the reference words perhaps even without becoming aware that we do, but it should improve our writing when we become even more systematic and precise in deploying them.
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See you at the Forum!
Joe Carillo

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